So i posted it on fanfiction.net as well... it's an interesting site meant for fan fictions only so it was perfect. Almost done with chapter two, i think it's ok too be a little shorter than the first chapter. Again here is the link for my booksie page
http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/novel/ssj5goku5/avatar:-the-legend-of-keyx-book-1:-earth

and on fanfiction.net you can just search for the show Avatar the last airbender then search the title of my book. please read and tell me your thoughts please. it's important to me